#story: something ends something begins
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crossbow bolts & goodbyes
i love it when ciri steps into geralt's role in the endings to the story :')
from the lesser evil, one of the original short stories and before ciri had even been concieved of as a character:
to the very end on the stairs in lady of the lake:
asides from "geralt quickly covered ciri with his body" and "very good, but if you ever do that again, i'll tan your hide"âthat ciri successfully pulls off the same move, deflects the crossbow bolt with her sword, like geralt has :') oh, witcher and witcher girl...
and in this same vein, it should also be mentioned, geralt and nenneke's parting at the end of the voice of reason:
to ciri and geralt's parting in something ends, something begins:
#i already wrote about the sailor lost amongst an archipelago thing so i won't here but that is the same thing too#the witcher books#excerpt#f: something more#c: geralt#c: ciri#story: the lesser evil#book: lady of the lake#story: the voice of reason#story: something ends something begins
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when people refer to canon story-relevant kingdom hearts games as âspinoffsâ it makes me sad not only for the obvious reasons i always say but also bc like man i WISH this series had spinoffs. imagine what they could do if they had permission from nomura to truly go off the rails and ignore the greater canon for a second and just do some fun whimsical plotless thing in an alternate universe. imagine a fishing/boating game on destiny islands. kh fighting game. it is an injustice that we have been deprived of kingdom karts. can anyone hear me
#in terms of alternate gameplay and lack of reliance on plot#i feel like melody of memory is the closest thing kh has actually had to a spinoff#but even that is important in its own way in the end#union cross to a certain degree as well what with being an online multiplayer gacha type game#its original concept i would definitely classify as a spinoff game#bc it was set in a totally different world and time period and was supposed to be about customization and fun with friends#and nomura or someone said it wasnât meant to be connected to the plot#but then like. he did very much go and give it a plot. like he went back on that almost immediately#and even then. given that the game is still very much combat and exploration#even from the beginning can it really be called a spinoff? itâs just kh in a different format#iâm talking like a game in which the objective is something totally different.#racing game or cooking game or fighting game or (another) rhythm game#ace attorney style detective game. dancing game. dude i donât know#there are so many different flavors they could go with here#alas nomura is allergic to genuine whimsy which is hilarious given that this is a disney series#like he apparently was like âohhh should we really let sora in smash? would it make sense in the story?â#my brother in christ surely weâre not supposed to interpret this as canon to kh right? right????#i guess itâs just that the kh franchise has a very specific pristine vibe he wants to maintain#which is disney shenanigans as a seasoning on top of a main dish of Stone Cold Serious Anime Plot#kingdom hearts#kh#mine: kh
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Mha chapter 429 Spoilers! Deku hugging ochaku mirrors exactly ochako's hug when Deku's 'heart' went out of control back all those chapters ago. In both cases, both their hearts were out of control because of someone else. Izuku because of Katsuki and Ochako because of Toga. Again, they're mirrors. They've been mirroring each other for a long time. Izuku knew exactly what to say, because he literally understands. He really does. Now, I absolutely loved the tenderness of the scene. The 'hey, you can let the ugliness out, I'm here, it's okay. You can let it out." Izuku has been dealing with his own closed-off heart for a long time, and we still haven't seen HIM open up properly. I'm not sure how the manga will handle it, IF it will. But it feels like there's something missing, for Izuku's character to round up. I vote for Deku vs Kacchan 3, a reversed of 'The only one that can accept Kacchan's feelings is me'
#bakudeku#togachako#somehow they made it gay#im not downplaying the moment between deku and uraraka btw#theyre great and tbh as they are? they're a wonderful pair. Theyre great friends and that's every good relationship's bones#im also self indulgent as fuck and have been a fan of the whole bkdk slow SLOW uphill slope development so Im also rooting for them#but tbh bnha was never about the romance. its a story of heroes. in many ways and forms. And I loved how hopeful this last chapter was. The#The breaking of cycles despite the ugliness of it#im very happy. its such a hopeful ending. no fights. no big..something. I fucking loved it#Im a sucker for 'this is just the beginning' at the very end of stories#fuck#uraraka ochako#izuku midoriya#katsuki bakugou#bnha spoilers#mha spoilers#mha leaks#bnha leaks#boku no hero spoilers
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in honor of my sudden re-binging of TRC, i finally bring out an unposted quality archive from 2017
#it's a wonder i still have it#idk how it is in other countries but here a lot of old clamps have not been reprinted yet and are therefore rarer than gold#so when i get new copies it's been long enough that i can start over from the beginning lmao. same strife with xxxh0lic#which unlike trc i did not read as scans first and refuse to. it will take me 20 years to see the end of the story#anyway this week i meant to draw and i said the next manga i'd read would be something new but here i am#gina if you're out there. i'm blowing you a kiss. kur0fai flavored#tsubasa reservoir chronicle#fai d. fluorite#mokona#this is not worthy of my artblog#pyro draws
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This seems to be an uncommon opinion but thank god SSO is making (what appears to be) serious headway into the story.
For years it felt like it had stalled out. It was valid wanting main characters and villains to be visually updated before continuing, but it slowed things down.
I'm glad they aren't going "we need to update Mr. Sands, Darko is a pretty old model compared to the Dark Riders, Avalon really needs an update, so does Pi, etc"
Because yes it absolutely would look better if everyone had the same number of polygons. And yes it WOULD be great if SSO picked up those threads mentioned throughout the main story. But if they did that and got all those map areas that had been brought up in the story quests then it'd be another 10 years of filler in the main story until they can 'wrap up'
And honestly I'm tired of waiting. This isn't even an impatience thing, this is a "I've played this game for 10+ years and at this point I don't care how it's wrapped up, as long as it IS wrapped up."
Probably helps that I don't expected a 'satisfying' ending from SSO, I just want AN ending to the main story. I expect Garnok to be 'defeated' and for the Soul Riders to be victorious, probably through the power of friendship. That's all I'm expecting.
#don't mind me I'm talking#sso#ssoblr#if i wanted super complicated story telling and character stuff I'd rewatch Babylon 5#because SSO ain't it#sso also just is not the medium for it because you have to make a new account and pay for it to replay it#so it's not a great medium honestly for a story that you want or need to replay multiple times to get All The Depth#I just want to be free please just end it#I know it won't end anytime soon but yes bring me closer to that sweet release#plot twist at the end of the Main Story Ydris gives you the chance to start from the beginning again#and that's how SSO let's us replay the game you just have to play through all of it first hA#wouldn't that be something
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i think mostly we as a culture need to stop pretending media is for us and instead recognize that it's for the people making it. "the show didn't do the thing I wanted it to" is so not the point. did it do what the people making it wanted it to do? did it tell the story they were trying to tell? than it was successful. if that doesn't align with what you wanted to happen, don't get up in arms about it. don't badmouth the creators and throw a tantrum. that's what fan works are for. the text is the text, and it told the story it was telling. you wouldn't be like "ugh shakespeare is insane for act v btw like there was no reason for juliet to kill herself she should've just waited and then her and romeo could have been together wtf this ruined the whole play" like no!!! the themes were there the set-up was there the foreshadowing was there shakespeare did what he intended to. just because it wasn't a happy ending and just because you thought it should've went differently doesn't mean it was bad. read a fic where juliet lives and move on.
#this is about ghosts but honestly fandom in general#stop pretending the creators of things owe you certain story lines. they're making it not you#i explained it like this to my sister:#imagine you're reading a book and there are sort of hints and scenes that you take to interpret a character as gay#you cite quotes and talk about the themes and the impact of your interpretation#and then at the end of the book the character comes out as asexual.#and then a lot of those scenes and quotes that you were using as evidence for your interpretation-#now they could be construed to have been pointing towards them being ace all along#just because it wasnt the end you fabricated in your head based on your understanding of the hints#doesn't mean it wasnt always the writers plan from the beginning.#AND it doesnt mean you can't keep imagining a world where they're gay instead#it just means that the writer was leaving those clues to point you towards the ending#and you interpreted the clues differently#bbc ghosts#ghosts spoilers#bc like. if last resort was the ending#you could 'read' the whole series with the understanding that they weren't going to leave the house#and the foreshadowing would add up#but now with the special. you can go back and 'read' the series with the understanding that they leave#and it still all adds up. the foreshadowing was there it just meant something different than you thought.#stories have beginnings middles and ends#you predetermined the ending while still in the middle and got mad when you weren't right.#does that make sense?
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*thinking about the villains' tragic fates*
You know, their routes never really talk too much about their fates and how it effects them mentally. Or how the MC feels about it, and dealing with the fear and angst of it with the slight exception of William's route
*eyes widen*
... I think I know what the sequels are gonna be about
#I am scared both because it will be angsty and because they might not do this and mess up the sequels#from what I can tell Ikemen sequels can be pretty hard to do right#partly because the playerbase has over a year to imagine their own post-route and get attached to that#and because added onto an already finished story can be difficult without potentially accidentally undoing the efforts of the characters#I haven't read a lot of ikemen sequels so I could be wrong#but Ikevil doesnât have this problem so much because it feels like there are some loose threads left with their relationship and character#not enough that it leaves you unsatisfied but enough that you could definitely expand upon it#I guess the tricky thing then would be expanding upon it in a way that people like#but for me I noticed some of the routes don't feel like one full finished story in terms of their relationship#it feels like the beginning of something#specifically I get that feeling for Liam's and Harrison's route#like the story ends with them getting together because we spent the whole story getting to know each other and learning their backstory#but it still feels like there's stuff to untangle and figure out in a relationship with them#I just hope that some of the sequels will be more slow paced#and whatever Crown mission going on is only meant to enhance the character journey like in Elbert's route#instead of being the main source of drama#but it could depend with the character and what type of story a sequel for them would be best for#like William's sequel being more action-packed and stakes while Liam's is more soft#I feel like that would fit them#thank you for coming to my ted talk#...in the tags#ikevil#ikemen villains#ikemen series
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You know
We had the canon story with where they could at least save another timeline
You did a story where they managed to have their happy ending
And now, I suspect
It's time for the complete failure?
Nope, I've mentioned before that it will be good for one person, don't worry
#reverse canon#Still canon but in other way#just different#Can I also mention that we have a saved past universe in the happy future canon#And one canon that is still up to happen and looks like this one will not be very happy too#There are plenty of canons that I don't know about and I'm pretty sure something like what I do might exist somewhere and I don't know abou#it *giggle*#So yes#At least my mind will be in peace when I do the ending that I wanted to do from the very beginning#It might be a bit of surprise#At least I was surprised by myself ans wasn't sure if I can even really put it in the story#I hope no one will mind me about it mehh#*running away*
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early in the morning after dead'nt, orange has a question.
usually he'd still be asleep long past now, but he wanted to ask about... TDL.
without the others interrupting.
so, he goes to chosen's door.
immediately this plan starts to slip off the rails.
no one knows where dark is.
...........because the others may or may not have spent the entirety of last night searching for him in every nook and cranny except there and they said they'd tell him if they found him and no one woke him up yet so
that means, the only logical conclusion is: he's in chosen's room.
so how is orange gonna ask chosen his question????
well, usually, chosen lets him just walk in.
s0!
here goes nothin
he opens the utterly silent door.
green made it special for cho, because they didn't want anyone to ever hear it being opened.
as a special bonus, yellow was able to code the door in such a way that it would never need any maintenance related to sound: its hinges and latches would stay pristinely quiet, forever.
so chosen doesn't wake up when orange sneaks inside.
they wake up when orange takes one step in, spots bright red, and fails to stifle a gasp.
"oh shit!!" orange whispers.
chosen's eyes peek over the covers.
"I'm sorry! i didn't know- uh, i would've- if um- i can come back later-"
they stare at him. "what's wrong." chosen prefers clear and concise, especially early in the morning.
"you-" orange carefully picks his next words. "and him-"
they're in the same bed.
"yep." chosen nods.
orange stands there.
then he shrugs.
"um, sorry. on our shows, this is always a big point of conflict. we don't know why. so i just didn't want to- you know. assume otherwise."
"oh. thanks...?" chosen blinks sleepily. "yeah, it's okay."
"okay!"
"you wanted something?"
"yeah, so-"
orange cuts off again midsentence.
TDL is beginning to stir.
dark emits the highest little squeak-whine that orange has ever heard (even compared to red's baby rabbits), and raises a hand to tug chosen back down to the pillow.
chosen turns their entire face to him, trilling.
they both perform a little brushy-brushy head bonk thing.
then chosen maneuvers their body (under the covers) so it, presumably, mingles more tightly with dark's.
this is satisfactory - for now. dark grumbles about it and stuffs his head under chosen's chin.
orange stands pixel-perfectly still by the door.
"you were saying?" chosen finally turns back to him.
"uh," orange stalls.
dark's eyes open.
he awakens with terrifying speed, untangling from chosen, hoisting up from the covers, and raising a warning fireball within milliseconds.
the room shifts into blazing color and stark shadows.
he shrieks,
"GET OUT!!!"
it seems dark does not, "okay" this situation.
orange drops, scrambles, and miraculously operates the door with enough precision to tumble out the other side unscathed.
silently, the door shuts itself behind him.
...
the fireball is put away.
...
"cho, why do you allow The Beast into your room?"
chosen snorts. "it was him who rebuilt you."
dark snarls. "are you SURE it wasn't some trick? you watched the whole time? i don't trust it."
"i trust him."
"why? how?? you do understand why i have reservations about it???"
"yes," chosen nods. "But I trust him."
They press their very cold head into dark's very warm head, and both of them sigh in relief.
"He brought me you."
dark huffs. "mm."
...
"and other things," chosen concedes. "you... weren't there."
"tell me."
...
outside, orange is still collapsed, upside down, against the wall, across from chosen's door, where he crashed earlier in his escape.
red has just found him while coming upstairs to check out the commotion.
"orange!? u okay?"
"yeap," orange strains. "all good."
"what happened?"
orange's hand flops on the floor towards chosen's door. "you were right. dark's in there."
red takes a second to digest this.
then his hands fly up to his mouth.
"what're they doing in there?????? did you see???"
"yes. i dunno."
"were they ? ? ?
fucking ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?"
orange squints at him.
through the door, two voices loudly interrupt,
"NO!"
the angrier voice adds,
"AND FUCK OFF!"
red squeaks and hurries back down the stairs.
orange sighs deeply.
this has been a terrible learning experience for all.
#--/ story#chodark#now hang on. stay with me. there is ZERO romance in this story. none.#but there are totally references to it in the context of explaining how zero the romance is in this story- it's all a joke about 0 romance#that's the point lmao#but there is? something?? i do not have words for this. p lease explain to me if you know#and there's fluff. so \o/ take that how you will#alan becker#animator vs animation#ava orange#ava the chosen one#ava the dark lord#i just realized this type of posting first about the ending before any of the beginning is what Handplates did.......#......... heh. go read that if you haven't it's really good storytelling#anyhow WHAT IS HAPPENING I NEVER WRITE THIS MUCH THIS FAST AAAAWAWAA#im enjoying myself but also trying not to overextend <o> y'know?? y'know#that's it for now đđđĽđâ¨đđđŤđ¤đłď¸đŚ#edit: the wise one has spoken. we shall call this pairing...#qpr#queer platonic relationship#\o/đ congratulations to the happy mutual administrative associates#executable!au#ava au
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combining (one of my) favorite short story with (some of my) favorite characters â¤ď¸
#i want sigrdrifa to show up and yennefer to be like âoh. hey i didnât think we were friendsâ#and the priestess turns her face towards her with molten-gold eyes and goes âhello yenneferâ and yen gets full body chills lol#female friendship is when [checks notes] the patron goddess of motherhood grants you her boon and shows you your imminent immense suffering#too many marriage comedies where the groom has no friends. what about the friendless bride who never got along with the rest of the girls#to be fair geraltâs party isnât really âthe guysâ itâs like one guy one woman one [lazy hand gesture that says âbehold!â]#i would say âand the kidnapper of his daughterâ but i think cahir is in the audience for this he has like son-in-law status not groomsman#angoulĂŞme is in the audience striking up a best friendship with torque who decided to show up too#txt#f: a hansaâs a hansa#headcanons#story: something ends something begins#the witcher books#geralt of rivia#yes this is (checks timestamps) two months old but its still good#s: youâve condemned yourself to me#and yes the vampire that yarpen throws garlic at is regis why not. or vereena if she regenerated and just wanted to show up bc#she and nivellen got back together because that dumb son of a bitch forgave her for the horrors
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as true as the jokes about âeveryone wants to rewrite ninjagoâ are i feel like smthn people forget when complaining about the inconsistencies of the show is thatâŚ. it wasnât planned? itâs not like most other animated shows lately - it didnât start with a deeply fleshed out world or a meticulously designed pitch bible with grandiose plans for a long-term story or character arcs. the ninja donât originally get their powers from heredity because they werenât hereditary powers yet. the magic system doesnât make sense bc they literally just made it up as they went! they go back and forth on stuff like whether non-elementals can learn spinjitzu bc itâs a collaborative piece of media made by people with vastly different levels of control over the story, the animation, the sets, etc. that varied over the course of the series. itâs totally understandable and exciting to see so many people reworking the early stuff with the lore and logic later seasons introduced but i personally feel that⌠if youâre doing that. you need to understand why the show is like that instead of writing it off as being bad and shitty. it was working with what it had. itâs only what it is now because of that awkward troubleshooting phase, not in spite of it
#ninjago#textâ¨#youâre 100% allowed to criticize the show but i keep seeing people complain about the inconsistencies about like. their parents giving them#their powers especially. like yeah cool that wasnât a thing yet? they have different origins than the non-core elementals#because in the real world that idea hadnât even crossed their minds yet! the original story was a more traditional fantasy narrative of#normal people rising to the occasion and *gaining* powers through their own feats. the fact that they changed it later doesnât mean#it was necessarily bad to begin with or that itâs something that should be mocked#idk just. thereâs a lot of hostility in some circles about this stuff and it makes me kinda sad. enjoy the complexity of production and how#series adapt over time. itâs part of why the show is so interesting to me#that essay i wrote had a whole bit juxtaposing the attitudes about technology in rebooted and prime empire and how they reflect greater#cultural trends between 2013 and 2021. itâs SUPER interesting and yet a lot of people only talk about it to make fun of how âbadâ it was :(#this isnt to say i donât enjoy some of the retcons. the changes to their meetings with wu in s8 are genuinely really interesting! i love the#changes to coleâs backstory. i think his mom makes him in the early seasons even better! iâm just saying.. be respectful? nobody *tries* to#make a bad show. ages and ages of time and dedication were put into what ends up on your screens. itâs all human love and creation.#as goofy as it is#okay sry got all anthropology there but hm. been thinking about this for a while. apologies for being the local annoying early seasons fan
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Rivalries (at least ones that arenât in the pre-existing lore, Ala Viggo and riders, Alpheus and Ant, so on and so forthâŚ)
I genuinely donât really see Snotlout and Alpheus getting along. Their personalities clash too much, and Snotlout just gets beef with anyone new in this story, due to trying to protect the other riders. Alpheus being a little pompous and cocky and âso this is the brainless muscle-head?â Upon first meeting didnât really help either. Lots of petty pranks and fights between these two, with poor Ant playing mediator, albeit reluctantly due to not knowing Alpheus too well himself, he just knows Snotlout. Honestly Iâm not sure about Alpheus and Dagur either, i donât know if Alpheus would play nice with someone named Deranged, though I do see Dagur enjoying messing with him, but thatâs neither here nor there-
Kaiko and Viggo have had beef for longer than Fontaine has been alive, so Viggo starts sweating when he realizes that Ant is Kaikos kid. She also scares him a little bitâŚor a lot a bit. Assassination attempts have been had, on both sides. As well as petty smack downs with whatever they can get their hands on. Like the drawing above, where little-sibling-extraordinaire Viggo (not to be confused to these two being siblings, just that their fights can resemble sibling fights sometimes) is utterly losing.
Camicazi and Mad Madeline are a case of thief meets thief, but Madeline is better at it than Camicazi, with the additional bonus of being a sea-faring pirate, and also being nearly five to six years younger than Camicazi. And Camicazi HATES someone being better at something than she is, especially something she insists on being so good at. So naturally they clash. Maddie spends most of it just messing with Camicazi, much to the older girls infuriation.
I would like to clarify that Astrid and Fontaineâs rivalry has nothing to do with race, though Astrid has never really interacted with a person of color due to the overall whiteness of the Archipelago, Ant being the only person with darker skin sheâs ever met till she leaves the Archipelago. No, itâs because theyâre both stubborn, Astrid hates being called out on her not-so-great actions, and being held responsible for those actions, and Fontaine loves pointing this out and poking the metaphorical sleeping bear that is an easy-to-piss-off Astrid Hofferson. There may be a bit of petty grudge-holding due to what Fontaine has heard about stuff that happened between Astrid and Ant too, which also pisses Astrid off. Fontaine has the same flaw of being incapable of acknowledging her own mistakes though, so Astrid makes plenty of jabs in her direction too with the same effectiveness.
Heather is obsessed with Kariâs dragon Ardyn, and Kari is mad about the time she straight up tried to run off with Ardyn. This is probably the pettiest of rivalries here, next to Camicazi and Madeline anyways. Heather pretty much just pulled an Alpheus and started having beef with a thirteen year old for no real reason beyond spite and petty rage. Granted, little Kari is a menace who is not above biting, and has bitten Heather, so thereâs some of a reasonable grudge there. (Especially not helped by Heathers older brother teaching the little brat how to shoot a crossbow-) Itâs hard to feel justified venting to someone about it though when youâre reminded youâre getting into squabbles with a tweenager a head and a half shorter than you who hasnât even started puberty yet. Heatherâs younger than Alpheus is in the show, so itâs a little less embarrassing when she loses, especially when itâs over something wildly different
These are the ones I can think of, and Iâve got doodles i want to draw to further elaborate on these dynamics, that might not come to light in the actual story itself. I dunno yet, weâll see. Iâm juggling a couple of things irl at the moment, so new stuff might be a bit scarce, but iâm hoping to send chapter three to my beta in a few days! So hopefully chapter three comes out sometime in the next few weeks
#if it were a little hard to tell. alpheus is wearing that giant trench coat he has in his concept#and itâs upturned over his head#donât ask where Kaiko got the flipper im too lazy to come up with an excuse#lets say spite#i got really lazy with the coloring#Iâve also finally finally FINALLY settled on something or another for the Nektons#especially Fontaine#in regards to design anyways im still working out backstory and lore and location#fontaineâs going to actually end up with two designs. as thereâs a time skip down the line#im also playing around with buffstrid in this story#sheâs a baby buffstrid in the beginning#but she gets a little more buff further down the line#not nearly as buff as Iâve drawn Scarl and Agatha#but she doesnât have noodle arms either#she throws a giant ax around everywhere. give the girl some muscle!#the deep 2015#the deep cartoon#httyd#httyd/the deep crossover#alpheus benthos#snotlout jorgenson#httyd hookfang#kaiko nekton#httyd viggo#httyd oc#the deep oc#mad madeline#fontaine nekton#astrid hofferson#httyd heather
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Pappappappappap.
Turn left. Up three slats. Forward for a bit. Hang a right.
Ancient drywall dust speckled the ground at his paws, the wood old and dry and at risk for splintering. It was an absolute playground.
The rat did not know this, but the house had been abandoned for years. On the other side of the wall sat dusty furniture and heavily graffitied wallpaper, empty glass bottles, and general litter. The town had debated knocking it over, putting up a parking lot, but decided against it.
There wasnât even a shopping mall. What would we need the lot for?
So there the house remained. Abandoned and unloved by humans. The teens who hid in the leaf-filled kitchen to smoke after school did not love the house, with its 3 floors and creaky stairs. The college students who appeared each Thanksgiving night to drink and reminisce, pretending they were anything other than babies in the world did not love the houseâs study, home to an elderly desk that no one cared enough to look in. The rats and birds and insects and squirrels did not see the need for the money, or the books, or the gold watch that still, despite it all, ticked.
Pappappappappap.
His little feet pounded ever forward, his little round body squeezing effortlessly upwards between wooden planks.
The little rat, with his round body and busy feet, loved the house. He did not care about the once-expensive looking rugs, or the elegant, but stained, crown molding, and he did not care about the ornate door knobs. The little rat, in no particular order, loved these things about the house:
He loved the still-somewhat-silver silverware that sat in a kitchen drawer for the noise it made when he scurried over them (knives make for a particularly pleasant noise, with their flat edges that slide off of one another).
He loved the bookshelves that lined the walls of most of the rooms, because they made for excellent perches to sit on to survey the floor (not to mention that if one of the books could be knocked over, a page could be taken for a nest with incredible ease).
He loved the plushies left behind in one of the smaller upstairs rooms. There was one that looked like him! Although this was not his favorite (that honor belonged to a little brown bear, who lay on his back, leaving his stomach open for the most wonderful of naps), it pleased him. A mirror had been knocked off the bathroom cabinet and shattered, its shards sparkling on the floor. The little rat tended to avoid that room, knowing simply that the little silver points were bad news, and not needing more information than that. However, he had not come to this conclusion without first exploring the room, for the initial shattering had mimicked the pleasant sounds of the silverware, but times a thousand. He was intrigued by the other little round-bodied rat who looked back at him from one of the shards. He hoped he was not lonely in there.
But the little rat did not love the house for what it contained. Its contents were beneficial and made life interesting and wonderful, but he would have loved the house if it were vacant and cold and bare and boring. The little rat loved the house because it was his home, and because his home loved him.
His home protected him from the rain and the snow and the cold and the heat, his home kept him entertained and safe and happy. He needed nothing and wanted for less.
Pappappappappappap.
He wanted to do something nice for his home. But what did he have to offer? He couldnât fix the leaky roof, or replace a cracked tile, couldnât put a chair back upright or even change a lightbulb.
Ultimately, he decided the best way he could show his love would simply be to live in his home. His home would understand his limitations, while still seeing that the little rat stayed because he wanted to, and because staying was important to him.
He climbed higher and higher, ascending more and more wooden slats and boards, scurrying from opening to opening, until finally: a break in the wall.
Drywall parted, and the little rat felt himself becoming giddy. He inched forward, his little nose twitching furiously, his little black eyes boggling.
He panted slightly, having climbed all the way up to the second floor. A journey that would take a human seconds had taken him several minutes. He looked out from his little hole in the drywall to see the ancient chandelier at eye level. If he wanted, he could climb all the way to the very top, and look down onto the chandelier. Heâd done this several times, and would, inevitably, do it again.
But there was something magical to being eye level with the sparkly glass. He would say nature played a cruel joke on him, leading him to his home and cursing him with his blurred vision, stopping him from admiring the intricate details of the crystal before him, but the simple problem with this is that he didnât know any better, didnât know there was a world outside of the outlines and colors he saw. He loved his home for its outlines and colors, for the way that the chandelier caught the light at certain hours of the day. He loved the sparkle of the rainbow that was cast about the entryway.
Nature was not cruel, nature did not punish him or play jokes. It loved him. It loved him the way he loved his home, it protected him and marveled at him and delighted in his joy.
He sat there, squeaking with great contentment as the sun went down and its rays caught the glass, bathing him and the home he loved in color.
#i've been having some crazy writers block lately. here's the beginning of something i originally intended to be a one off#but i fear i'm gonna add to this more later. i'm having fun! i want to write something with a happy ending! for the first time in a while!#writers#writers on tumblr#writer#original writing#original story#third person pov#third person perspective#rats#rat#ratblr#fiction#fiction writing#adventure fiction#adventure#adventure writing#cute#wholesome#short story#short fiction#writeblr
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guy wakes up in a place he recognizes but doesn't know why or how he got there. he's a bit confused but he lives out the next few hours just like he normally would, just a bit dazed. but once he goes to sleep, it immediately restarts back to where he woke up.
he realizes this is a time loop... but something is different about it.
he realizes pretty quickly that this is some sort of dreamscape. it's a time loop, but for some reason, things around him do change, and he can pretty easily change things too just by thinking of them, like a lucid dream. but he always wakes up in media res once it gets to some sort of end point, and no one else around him remembers previous loops.
as he's trying to figure out what the goal is to end the loop, he's suddenly thrown for a loop when he's attacked and killed by someone he's never seen before. he wakes back up, shaken, but at least it was something new and out of his control.
he starts to go about as he had been but is killed again. faster and faster, sooner and sooner after he wakes up, he's killed by increasingly horrifying ways, all because of this other dude. finally, it stops when he manages to get a word in to the other guy before he's killed. turns out this guy is also in the time loop, and our guy was the first thing he saw that was different. thinking he was the test, or had something to do with it, he attacked him. his time was reset, so he knew he was onto something, hence the repeat killings. he was obviously taking this a lot harder than the first guy.
they decided to work together and figure out a way to stop the loop. they could both affect things with their lucidity and they tested what they could do. they could do a lot, though none of it seemed to matter. if one of them died, or got to some sort of "end point," they'd both reset. they slowly stopped really trying to get out and started just enjoying their time. they imagined things they'd always wanted to experience or see, and it would happen. it was fun.
eventually, they started noticing a certain girl was around more than any other person. she didn't seem to also be in a time loop, but she wouldnt completely forget who they were with each reset, either. they decided to befriend her and bring her along because it was nice to have company after all this time. she enjoyed the experiences they were conjuring but didn't find it incredibly impossible like a real life person would at seeing what was essentially magic. typical dream-based character acceptance behavior.
at one point, they're sitting on the pavement of a parking lot watching the sunset they thought up of, just talking casually. guy one notices that the sunset starts moving backward and forward in time, rhythmically, preventing the sun from setting. things would "escape" their control sometimes, but he realized the sun was going up and down at the same rhythm that the girl was rocking back and forth. she simply looked upon it in calm awe, not acknowledging that she may be influencing it. before guy one could say anything, guy two reached past him and shot her in the head.
time did not reset.
things went on, as much as it does in a dreamscape time loop, and they had settled into some kind of pattern of normalcy. most days they didn't even talk about trying to get out of there. they were able to carve some comfort out of their situation.
eventually, guy two runs up to guy one with the girl. he's excited and says he's thought of another thing to try to get them out. he says they just need to get into a truck and drive backwards really fast. confused, guy one asks why he thinks this would work at all. guy two says he has no idea. he just knows it'll work. he has a feeling.
so they go to an open nature area with a long road and conjure up a pickup truck. guy two is driving, with guy one in the passenger seat and the girl in the small backseat. guy two revs up and barrels backwards, whooping and celebrating the stunt, saying they're getting out of here.
guy one sees the trees whip by. they go over a bridge crossing a lake. the sky is bright with sun. he looks at guy two. his eyes are wild, his mouth in a gruesome open smile as he hollers. the girl in the backseat simply looked on in ignorant bliss.
guy one knew then.
he opened his door and jumped out, tucking and rolling. as he did, he thought about the truck barreling backwards off a cliff. when he stopped and got up, he saw just that. time slowed as the truck lost traction with the road and started to soar. guy two's face fell as he saw guy one standing there, looking down at them from the edge, face solemn. a look of shocked realization spread across his face as he descended towards the ground below.
then i woke up with a splitting headache. so. i guess i escaped the time loop???
#this is all 1000% true btw#all of this happened. i actually left OUT some details but these were the story beats#literally as i was waking up i thought this was a black mirror episode or something that i was remembering#i edited it out eventually but i first started this post with 'can someone tell me if this was a dream or something ive seen before'#cuz i started writing as soon as i woke up#as i became more lucid i realized it was a million percent a dream lol#but holy shit. how meta???#my dreams are often like movies like this but i haven't had one in a lonnng time#and they're never about THIS sort of thing#and it HAD AN ENDING!!! THAT ACTUALLY GOES ALONG WITH ME WAKING UP???#it's actually kinda freaking me out. a little bit#dream#dreams#dream diary#time loop#lucid dreaming#to be clear i was not lucid dreaming but the characters were lol#it was half third person half pov of guy one#mine#writing#dude this dream had acts. sorry structure. consistent plot. an ending that tracks with the beginning. hello?
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As cute as satosugu is, it's SO important to me that no matter how much they loved each other (romantically or platonically idrc to argue w/ ppl) they did NOT tell each other. That they lost their chance bc they were young and strong and full of hope and they thought they had all the time in the world to tell the other how they felt, y'know, like how teenagers are supposed to feel about life. But they couldn't be together, they couldn't have each other's company the way they really wanted. Their youths were forcefully taken away from them their emotions that they were still not fully settled on forced out of their hands because they had bigger more grave things to worry about now. It's so important to me that they were always doomed no matter what.
#satosugu#like not even bc I like angst ir anything their youth is just... a small preview of the story as a whole#it's so important to me that even though they loved each other they left without ever being able to say it#bc they were so isolated and so traumatised and not given the time or tools to deal with it all that they would end up here no matter what#even if riko hadn't met her fate the way she did even if toji never showed up#something else would#because that's the terrible world they lived in and that's the future the elders have built for the next generation#bc everyone is doomed by the prejudice and arrogance of weak shitty dusty old people that would rather you be dead than give up their power#I have.... a lot of thoughts about satosugu and sukugo#like of course the only people that ever made satoru happy were people deemed too monsterous by jujutsu society#of course it was the rejects of the system that could even begin to understand his dehumanisation and maybe bring him out of the lonliness#like just... ughhhhhhh#I'm thinking about jjk again I'm gonna throw UP#they loved each other so much but they left each other with nothing but unresolved and unburied ghosts to no fault of either of them really#it was inevitable for them
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8: hewn
Only one teacher is allowed into the Theatre of Tales, the night before the Circus of Talents. The rest are locked in their rooms, doors spelled shut with a magic far older and more powerful than their own, for all the Dean of Good might try.
But August Sader walks unrestricted in the School; Rafal could not keep him trapped if he tried. Not that he would try. Thereâs an old analogy about two birds. One that has every luxury in the world, but is kept in a locked cage. Another that has nothing, except for its freedom to come and go as it pleases. The first will fly away as soon as it is able. The second will always come back home.
August is still unsure of which, exactly, Rafal sees him as. Or which he is.
Rafal must know that, in the end, they are not on the same side.
But he is kind to August, or if not kind, at least lenient with him in ways no one else is afforded. Of all his colleagues August alone is allowed the privilege of freely coming and going wherever he desires. He can go home, meet his brothers, meet their childrenâ if they want to see him. He can visit his sister and her twins, Rafalâs twinsâ if she lets him. Most of the time she doesnât. The last time he saw Rhian and Japeth was their eighth birthday, the year before Evelyn sent them off to Arbed House.
A lot of the freedoms Rafal allows him are not freedoms at all, really. August would not leave the School if he could help it. He likes it here, really, likes that heâs familiar with the winding steps and the ever-alike classrooms and the intersecting hallways, likes that he knows his way around.
More than that, this is his duty. This School; this post.
And this man, just a man, who knows full well August would never believe his mystique. The School Master is sparing with his name, but heâd given it to August freely: Rafal, or, as I was known before, Rhian. Call me Rafal. My dear brother was wrong about me. Heâs dead, now.
August, who had written and animated his first draft of the Studentâs History of the Woods about Rafal and Rhian, or the other way aroundâ then promptly burned itâ had only nodded. Rafalâs mask had glinted, a blur of silver in Augustâs vision. I look forward to working with you, my Seer, heâd said.
My Seer. Rafal has always treated him like a possession, a prize. Has always been so proud that August chose to come to him. It is something that is easy to resent.
And yet August chooses to come to him, even now. Chooses to sit and listen patiently as Rafal enchants wooden likenesses of dying princes, on the other side of the Theatre for Tales. Heâs spelled them to die with choked-off screams and feeble declarations of Good, though August isnât sure how theyâre dying exactly. It would be disturbing, if they werenât in a School quite literally raising children to kill each other in their fourth year.
August has been dreaming of these things for years. Before he knew what they were.
Heâs been dreaming of Rafal for longer. He knows all this already.
One last scream, and the room drifts mercifully into silence. Rafal turns, his boots clicking neatly on the floor as he makes his way back to the Good side of the theatre, cape sweeping over the floor with more flair than ever necessary.
He comes to a stop in front of August; offers his arm, fingers brushing Augustâs shoulder. There is not much August can do other than take it, gripping his cane firmly as Rafal pulls him to his feet. Rafalâs hands are, as always, ice-cold.
âYou never have anything to say,â Rafal says lightly, half-complaining. âPerhaps this is the year my art finally gets through to you.â
âOur dearly beloved School Master,â August says, acerbic. âAn artist. Perhaps you should pursue that, instead.â
âI could say the same about you, my dearly beloved Seer,â Rafal laughs. He seems happy to have gotten a rise out of August at all.
They pause just in front of the wall. August brushes his fingers over the carvings with a gentle touch; the carved knights cough and cry as he does. Itâs good workmanship. Rafal has had a hundred years to improve on it, after all. But itâs not a very pleasant experience.
He says as much. âItâs not supposed to be,â Rafal replies, âtheyâre Evil.â He guides August to a carving of⌠some monster, or another, one that roars under his touch, spitting a burst of burning sparks. August tugs his hand back reproachfully. Rafal laughs, again.
âIâll enchant something nicer for Good,â he promises. âYouâd like that, wouldnât you? Our first Good Seer in generations. Our first Seer with any sort of allegiance.â His voice strays dark as he completes the thought.
âYou know very well why I have an allegiance,â August says mildly. Itâs his duty; to kill Rafal. There is only one way this story ends.
âWe could have been such good friends,â Rafal sighs. âYou and I. But then I suppose we would have no reason to be.â He hooks his arm through Augustâs once again. They play at closeness, the two of them. Or Rafal does, at any rate.
They move to the crystal freizes, on Goodâs side of the Theatre. They must be lovely, like everything to do with Good is. The stained glass is pleasantly cool under Augustâs fingers; he makes out the outline of a rose in bloom.
âIâm thinking of having them bloom as the students enter,â Rafal says idly. âNo monsters here.â
âYou just resent that Good keeps winning,â August sighs.
âI do,â Rafal admits openly. He has nothing to hide from August. He could not, either way. âThere are more carvings, lower down, if you care for them.â
August nudges at the base of the wall with his cane, curious; he kneels to feel the raised patterns. Textured feathers. There, a wing, another. Borne in flight.
âSwans,â Rafal provides. Of course. Heâs more predictable than he thinks.
August moves his cane along the wall, then starts walking back towards the other side, cane knocking against the continuous loop of carvings. Twin swans hewn all around the Theatre. A reminder of a promise unfulfilled.
Rafal doesnât usually care so much.
But, of course, this Circus is special.
âThis will be the tale to end all tales,â the School Master says, almost to himself. âWonât it, August?â
âI donât take questions,â August says.
âThis is what youâre here for, after all,â Rafal continues, as if August had never spoken at all. âWhat role are you going to play, I wonder? Will we have to be enemies?â
This is the second to last time they will ever meet each other. August has spent years knowing Rafal, years with the idea of himâ the shadow of himâ living in his head. It was never going to amount to anything more than this.
Will he fly free, out of this gilded cage? Or has he sworn himself to Rafal, and his tale, and his end? You go on, no matter the cost. Seers donât speak of costs, they only speak of duty.
Either way, both of them are trapped.
âYou know,â Rafal says. Almost wistful. âYou know, if I had the chance, I would want it to be you.â
#sge#tsfgae#school for good and evil#august sader#rafal mistral#saderposting#sge november prompts#uh yeah i did in fact rotate the idea of august/rafal around in my head for like 3 years#they have a screwed up something-like-a-relationship in my head#equals as in: no one else is playing this game on the same level as them#equals as in: no one else can even begin to understand#they both know how this story ends
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